PART 2
\During traveling they shared their experiences of their time spend in school. Andrew was quite famous in school as he was a quarterback in school football team and he was termed as a wolf for sleeping with almost all the girls in the school. William on the other hand was a virgin by his own will cause he always thought about waiting for the perfect girl and he never went more then a smooch during the school time. “Are you gay”, asked Andrew, that caught William by surprise, he replied “ hell no”. Andrew loved to mock William a lot which annoyed William to a certain extend
Traveling about 10 hours they passed through a hotel, Andrew parked the car on side of the road to check the hotel, it was a old castle turned into a hotel. It was spooky and it looked it hadn’t been clean since decades. A chill went through both of their spine, they wondered who would live in a place like this, both of them resumed their journey. They reached their place 20 minutes later, there it was on the border of town, the famous spring lake with waterfall
There was vast greenery and the water was blue in colour as the sky. They raced down to the lake to take a well deserved bath. After swimming for almost 30 minutes they layed down near the surface of the lake and both of them went to layed down.. The rest of the day went in exploring their surrounding area.. they went to bed early in the night exhausted from days traveling
Next day both were fresh, they unpacked all their stuff and removed the boat from top of the car and tied it to the tree near the lake. Both of them hadn’t eaten the other night cause of exhaustion, they were very hungry. William brought the basket aunt mary had packed for them, it had many chicken sandwiches which were enough to feed a whole troop of soldiers. Merrily both of them finished the whole basket and were surprised at their own appetite. William went to get dry logs for fire, when he came back he saw Andrew removing a ice pack from the car
\“Catch”, yelled Andrew and threw a beer can towards William. Who caught it after juggling it for about 3 times. “when did u get this”, exclaimed William. He explained that he had sneaked out of the house at night to stuff them up with beers and vodka. As the temperature was about as low as 8 degree vodka was all they needed to heat up and with a fish they caught fishing was quite a bonus to eat
Andrew removed a gun and told William he wanted to hunt. William’s stomach tightened, he hated people hunting the animals for their own fun. He started to pray that Andrew wouldn’t see any animals and for this he tried to be as noisy as he could while talking to Andrew. the trick worked , Andrew got pissed and sat below a tree, both of them had walked a far distance from their camping area
William pointed towards a bush, “the bush looks like it has been dragged to cover something”, “lets check it out” exclaimed Andrew. When they went near the bush they saw blood strains on the ground, both their eyes widened and they stood looking at each other for sometime. They wondered what is behind the bush a corpse, or some criminal who ran away from cop injured, both of them moved the bush.
\The next thing they saw surprised them more, behind the bush there was a cave. The opening of cave was about only 5 feet. They decided to check out the cave some other day, both of them forgot about the blood strain. As it was becoming to be dark they headed back to the camp
\They decided to sleep outside the car under the beautiful sky, it was a full moon day and whole sky was illuminating with the beauty of the shiny moon. William wondered if there was a perfect place he would want to propose a girl it would be here and no where else, if ever he finds her
Following day, Andrew and William made their way up to the camp armed with flashlights and a backpack. They both loved adventure and this made them more excited. Several things they had discussed about the caves and stuff inside, they wondered if any hidden treasure was there or some kings corpse was hidden or some drugs. Whole night they didn’t sleep properly cause curiosity kept them awake.<
After 10 minutes they were standing in front of the cave entrance, they entered the cave ducking in cause both of them were about 6 feet tall. It was very dark and cold, Andrew switched on his torch and both of them started exploring the cave. After walking a little farther the cave became taller, this wasn’t a natural cave the thing that striked them, it was a man made cave. Both of them wondered why would any one build a cave in between a forest
They walked for about 30 minutes, waiting to see when the cave ended, William as clumsy as ever fell about 15 times walking and Andrew was having fun time laughing. William fell one more time and Andrew was seeing behind and walking. Bang, he dashed himself on a wall and fell down hard, he was dazed. It was Williams time of laughing
Andrew took about 5 minutes to recover from the shock of the collision, a large bump appeared on his head. “ a perfect horn for a devil” grinned William. Andrew ignored his comment and started seeing where they were. He saw a ladder on the wall, it was going up, he couldn’t see anything. He climbed the ladder on top there was a door, but it didn’t bulge. He pushed it harder, but to no avail
William tried to open but he also failed. They were disappointed that after walking so much they couldn’t find nothing. They thought why would any one put a path in a jungle to energy to do something like this
Looking at the time, they thought, it would be better to go back to the camp area before it got late. Atlast they reached the end of the cave. They breathed fresh air, it felt good. While walking back to the camp area, thy smelled smoke, glaring back at each other they ran towards the car. The car was burning, it was almost fully flamed up
Andrew went near the car, on the ground he saw a diesel can and burnt matchstick. This wasn’t a accidental fire but someone did it on purpose and wanted them to find out. Some one didn’t wanted them to stay here
For nearly an hour they searched for something that remained and was useful. Everything in the car had got burnt even their cell phones. Now they didn’t have clothes, food nor shelter. The clothes they were wearing had become dirty and a torn in several places cause of their adventure inside the cave
Even the map wasn’t there for them to search for a good location to stay and no phone was there for miles apart. They felt helpless, at that moment William said, “let’s go to the hotel, it’s just an hour walk from here. We don’t have any other option then the spooky place
\On the trail to the hotel they discussed why some one would want to scare them from the camp site. Andrew wondered if they had by mistakenly found something which didn’t amuse whoever who wanted to hide it.william was more worried what to explain to aunt mary about the car.he hoped the car was on insurance
\Fatigue and thirst took over their body while walking but neither one of them stopped walking as they didn’t wanted to be stuck in the forest late at night.they had heard a story of ghost in the forest wearing a white dress walking on side of the road
Neither one of them wanted an honor of meeting any ghost if so there was any so they continued walking. Later the hotel came into sight just when it was gonna be sunset.both of them sighed a breath of relief
\When they just entered the gate of the hotel and were walking towards the hotel they saw a boy following them, William went near the boy. The boy got frightened and stood still. “ we wont hurt you, just tell us what do you want?”, said William. The boy pointed at the watch and said he liked the watch, he was willing to do anythind for it.
William told him that if he could bring some clothes for them he would give him the watch as reward. The boy ran inside a shed in the hotel compound and later came back with sackful of clothes. The clothes had patches and were kind of lose for them but they didn’t have any other option so William gave him the watch. the boy put the watch around his hand and went away jumping in joy
Monday, January 3, 2011
PART 1
The sun was glaring down on the small town of Volkstown in Amsterdam.(the horizon was a thin line above Volkstown, Amsterdam) The town had an approximate population of about twenty hundred thousand people. It was a beautiful(yet quiet) town with hills and a big lake widely known as Spring Lake. By the lake, 2 guys sat fishing. They were best of friends. The older guy was Andrew. He was about 6 feet tall and well-built. Then there was William. A thin fellow with curly hair. (*plural for hair is hair..XD)
Andrew was the son of a famous lawyer in Chicago and William was the son of a well-known detective. They were both 18 yrs of age. Andrew being 4 months William's elder. they were buddies since kindergarten. Andrew and William became close friends as both their fathers were closely acquainted as well. Williams's father had died while working on a case when Will was only ( was a mere 10 yrs of age) 10 yrs old. His mom had died during labour. Ever since, William had lived with his aunt Mary who was his guardian.
Summer had just begun and both of them deserved a break after a long season of dating and football ( *and mugging or studying?). "Lets go camping this year," William suggested. "There's a beautiful place near Lexinton town. The perfect escape from this boring little town we call home. And why not live on the wild side for a bit?" Andrew sneered "Oh look who's trying to be Tarzan. Wants to live in the jungle, apparently," and said laughing. "Well yeah it's a good idea anyways. So when are we leaving?"(so when is the estimated time of departure,boss?) "As soon as Aunt Mary packs us chicken sandwiches and a lot of sweets,"(*sweets?? haha cute) said William, grinning. Both of them laughed and William continued fishing while Andrew killed some time by taking a short nap.
Later in the evening both of them hung out at William's place. At that moment aunt Mary came in with the groceries. "Let me help you with that, aunt", William offered. He got up and took the bag from his aunt.
She was exhausted. So she sat on the couch under the fan and relaxed for a while. Aunt Mary was about 44 years of age. She was still pretty attractive (didn't look a day over 35). Though she was William's guardian since his dad died, Will knew very little of her.
Aunt Mary was actually ( in partnership with William's dad) Williams's father's partner. She, too was assigned on the same case he was when he had died. Both of them were secretly engaged and were planning to get married after the case was closed. Destiny played an evil joke (/trick) on them as William's father died while taking a bullet for Mary during the investigation. Since then she vowed to take care of William as her own son.
William and Andrew discussed their plans with Aunt Mary. She was bemused with their excitement about the trip. In the end she obliged and gave them permission to go camping on condition that it would only be for three weeks and not a day more. Andrew called his parents and told them about the trip. After arguing on the phone for about 20 minutes, he walked back into the room smiling. The smile was enough for William to know that (the trip was on!) they both were going camping.
Both of them started packing for the trip. They went down to their local sporting goods store to rent a fishing boat, then headed over to the supermarket to get a tent and several other things needed for camping. They bought flash lights, match boxes(* they dont sell match sticks just lke that lmao) and a lot of marshmallows. As they drove into the driveway, they saw Aunt Mary standing on the porch waiting for them. "I've got a surprise for you boys. Follow me," she called out. They followed her into the garage. When she opened the garage, their jaws hit the floor.
The thing they saw had them flabbergasted,gobsmacked and everything in between. In front of them (Lo and behold!, It) was The Honda Element. The car featured some of the top amenities and accessories to help get cozy in the wild. Its configurable rear-seating can fold up and away, providing enough space for two adults to sleep comfortably on a double mattress. It also offers 77 cubic-feet cargo room to fit in all the essentials for either a short or long camping trip.
"Nice huh?" Well it belongs to a friend of mine and since you boys were so excited about the trip, I convinced him to lend it to me for a while. So be careful with it, now," said aunt Mary, smiling. They thanked her and told her she was the best. She never failed to surprise them.
They went to sleep early that night, around 10 pm, saying they were tired of the day's excitement and wanted to make an early start in the morning. Neither of them could wait for the next day. ( the trip had their adrenaline pumping) Later in the (at) night Andrew sneaked out of the room and came back after an hour while William was sleeping. (* why??)
"Beep..Beep" the alarm rang. It was 5 am in the morning. The boys got up and got dressed for their trip. They tip-toed down the stairs so that Aunt Mary would not be disturbed. "Why are you both walking like burglars down the stairs early in the morning? Go down and have your breakfast," they heard a voice from behind. Aunt Mary had gotten (woken) up at 4 am in the morning and prepared breakfast and lots of snacks for their trip. She always believed that breakfast was the day's most essential meal. She made pancakes, eggs and bacon.(*nething else?)
After eating so much, they had to loosen their belts a little or they were going to explode. ( They had to loosen their belts after the heavy meal or they were going to explode!) They went out to the car and checked that everything was in place. They loaded the fishing boat onto the roof of the car and tied it tightly. They were all set to jet. Before going, they decided to take a picture. "Click..Click" Aunt Mary removed their picture in front of the car. (*removed their picture or took their picture?)
The Trip
Andrew fit the key into the ignition making the engine rev up and roar like a mighty monster. He put the car in gear and they backed out of the driveway. This was the first time they were going so far without adults chaperoning . After an hour of driving they were at the outskirts of town and were about to get onto the highway. Lexington town was about 836 kilometers away from their house, which would mean they had, roughly, a twelve hour drive ahead of them, as the car would go, at the most, only about 80 km\hour.
They decided ( planned) to drive non-stop, stopping only at a fuel station to pump the car up. Both of them started planning their routes with the help of a map.
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the words in brackets without the star are phrases/words u can use IF u want to. besides what u already wrote. the words in the brackets with the star are from urs truly lol. annoying as usual and NOT meant to be in the story..=] theres lots more to be done with this portion of da story. its just a rough draft so far. tell me what u think.
The sun was glaring down on the small town of Volkstown in Amsterdam.(the horizon was a thin line above Volkstown, Amsterdam) The town had an approximate population of about twenty hundred thousand people. It was a beautiful(yet quiet) town with hills and a big lake widely known as Spring Lake. By the lake, 2 guys sat fishing. They were best of friends. The older guy was Andrew. He was about 6 feet tall and well-built. Then there was William. A thin fellow with curly hair. (*plural for hair is hair..XD)
Andrew was the son of a famous lawyer in Chicago and William was the son of a well-known detective. They were both 18 yrs of age. Andrew being 4 months William's elder. they were buddies since kindergarten. Andrew and William became close friends as both their fathers were closely acquainted as well. Williams's father had died while working on a case when Will was only ( was a mere 10 yrs of age) 10 yrs old. His mom had died during labour. Ever since, William had lived with his aunt Mary who was his guardian.
Summer had just begun and both of them deserved a break after a long season of dating and football ( *and mugging or studying?). "Lets go camping this year," William suggested. "There's a beautiful place near Lexinton town. The perfect escape from this boring little town we call home. And why not live on the wild side for a bit?" Andrew sneered "Oh look who's trying to be Tarzan. Wants to live in the jungle, apparently," and said laughing. "Well yeah it's a good idea anyways. So when are we leaving?"(so when is the estimated time of departure,boss?) "As soon as Aunt Mary packs us chicken sandwiches and a lot of sweets,"(*sweets?? haha cute) said William, grinning. Both of them laughed and William continued fishing while Andrew killed some time by taking a short nap.
Later in the evening both of them hung out at William's place. At that moment aunt Mary came in with the groceries. "Let me help you with that, aunt", William offered. He got up and took the bag from his aunt.
She was exhausted. So she sat on the couch under the fan and relaxed for a while. Aunt Mary was about 44 years of age. She was still pretty attractive (didn't look a day over 35). Though she was William's guardian since his dad died, Will knew very little of her.
Aunt Mary was actually ( in partnership with William's dad) Williams's father's partner. She, too was assigned on the same case he was when he had died. Both of them were secretly engaged and were planning to get married after the case was closed. Destiny played an evil joke (/trick) on them as William's father died while taking a bullet for Mary during the investigation. Since then she vowed to take care of William as her own son.
William and Andrew discussed their plans with Aunt Mary. She was bemused with their excitement about the trip. In the end she obliged and gave them permission to go camping on condition that it would only be for three weeks and not a day more. Andrew called his parents and told them about the trip. After arguing on the phone for about 20 minutes, he walked back into the room smiling. The smile was enough for William to know that (the trip was on!) they both were going camping.
Both of them started packing for the trip. They went down to their local sporting goods store to rent a fishing boat, then headed over to the supermarket to get a tent and several other things needed for camping. They bought flash lights, match boxes(* they dont sell match sticks just lke that lmao) and a lot of marshmallows. As they drove into the driveway, they saw Aunt Mary standing on the porch waiting for them. "I've got a surprise for you boys. Follow me," she called out. They followed her into the garage. When she opened the garage, their jaws hit the floor.
The thing they saw had them flabbergasted,gobsmacked and everything in between. In front of them (Lo and behold!, It) was The Honda Element. The car featured some of the top amenities and accessories to help get cozy in the wild. Its configurable rear-seating can fold up and away, providing enough space for two adults to sleep comfortably on a double mattress. It also offers 77 cubic-feet cargo room to fit in all the essentials for either a short or long camping trip.
"Nice huh?" Well it belongs to a friend of mine and since you boys were so excited about the trip, I convinced him to lend it to me for a while. So be careful with it, now," said aunt Mary, smiling. They thanked her and told her she was the best. She never failed to surprise them.
They went to sleep early that night, around 10 pm, saying they were tired of the day's excitement and wanted to make an early start in the morning. Neither of them could wait for the next day. ( the trip had their adrenaline pumping) Later in the (at) night Andrew sneaked out of the room and came back after an hour while William was sleeping. (* why??)
"Beep..Beep" the alarm rang. It was 5 am in the morning. The boys got up and got dressed for their trip. They tip-toed down the stairs so that Aunt Mary would not be disturbed. "Why are you both walking like burglars down the stairs early in the morning? Go down and have your breakfast," they heard a voice from behind. Aunt Mary had gotten (woken) up at 4 am in the morning and prepared breakfast and lots of snacks for their trip. She always believed that breakfast was the day's most essential meal. She made pancakes, eggs and bacon.(*nething else?)
After eating so much, they had to loosen their belts a little or they were going to explode. ( They had to loosen their belts after the heavy meal or they were going to explode!) They went out to the car and checked that everything was in place. They loaded the fishing boat onto the roof of the car and tied it tightly. They were all set to jet. Before going, they decided to take a picture. "Click..Click" Aunt Mary removed their picture in front of the car. (*removed their picture or took their picture?)
The Trip
Andrew fit the key into the ignition making the engine rev up and roar like a mighty monster. He put the car in gear and they backed out of the driveway. This was the first time they were going so far without adults chaperoning . After an hour of driving they were at the outskirts of town and were about to get onto the highway. Lexington town was about 836 kilometers away from their house, which would mean they had, roughly, a twelve hour drive ahead of them, as the car would go, at the most, only about 80 km\hour.
They decided ( planned) to drive non-stop, stopping only at a fuel station to pump the car up. Both of them started planning their routes with the help of a map.
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the words in brackets without the star are phrases/words u can use IF u want to. besides what u already wrote. the words in the brackets with the star are from urs truly lol. annoying as usual and NOT meant to be in the story..=] theres lots more to be done with this portion of da story. its just a rough draft so far. tell me what u think.
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